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Maddy
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« Reply #135 on Aug 13, 2004, 10:07am » | ![[Quote]](http://s1.images.proboards.com/buttons/quote.gif) |
Rewritten the last scene:
Jezebel lowered her head to ground the growl in her throat filling the stale air around her, her lips wrinkled back to expose her teeth, her ears lay flat on her head. She lowered into a crouching postion. Tensed. Leapt at the man-cub with a snarl.
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« Reply #136 on Aug 13, 2004, 3:06pm » | |
Ryp hadn't expected the were to jump at him; he didn't have time to roll over and dodge the attack. He just lay there for the time being.
Maybe Jez was just trying to scare him, he reasoned, maybe she wasn't really going to hurt him at all. But the hatred in her eyes screamed at him that he was wrong.
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« Reply #137 on Aug 13, 2004, 9:23pm » | |
Ichi let out a laugh that sounded more like a bark. "Pathetic human!" she barked as Jez lept at him. She got up and slowly walked over the Lavan untill she was standing right over his low form, her head held high her tail up. "Do you really think you will get out of this without loosing something." She laughed again, showing her teeth.
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« Reply #138 on Aug 14, 2004, 2:09am » | |
Lavan smiled at the human's difficulties to comprehend his situation.
He walked over to them and circled untill he was by the human's head.
*Are you afraid now?* he thought to him.
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Maddy
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« Reply #139 on Aug 16, 2004, 8:33pm » | |
Jezebel curled herself into a leaping postion again. This time being to leap at the boy and she was determined not to miss.
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« Reply #140 on Aug 17, 2004, 11:11pm » | |
No... I'm not scared.... go ahead, wolf. Ryp concentrated hard on his thoughts, screaming them in his mind. He wouldn't answer Ichi's question... she had betrayed him... he thought she was his ally....
He was wrong. Again.
And now he was going to die because of it.
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--I haven't been here long enough to know... everytime I feel this I just lose control. Such a cancer on the face of everything that's beautiful. I wish that this would just go.-- |
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Maddy
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« Reply #141 on Aug 19, 2004, 9:17pm » | |
Jezebel lept on to the boy pinning him to the floor. As his hand went up to defend himself she bit down into it hearing tendons sever and bone fracture as she did. But what she didn't notice was that the boy's left leg was between her own...
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« Reply #142 on Aug 20, 2004, 9:12am » | |
((OOC: Maddy, please don't auto-hit me))
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« Reply #143 on Aug 22, 2004, 6:38pm » | |
ooc: I have given you an out... kick me off for chrissakes
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Maddy
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« Reply #144 on Aug 27, 2004, 12:23am » | |
ooc: nm
Jezebel staggers off of the boy, half changing to human form her hands to her bloody lips, her eyes wide all the blood lust vanished. She sat back on her calfs, her aura radianting regret"Oh no," she whispered. Then she disappered in wisp of dark smoke that smelled like sandalwood.
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« Reply #145 on Aug 27, 2004, 2:29pm » | |
Ichi let out a long low sigh as Jez disappeared. "It's funny how the lust for blood can leave someone so quickly..." she sighed again and stared at the human. "Well since no one has payed me to kill you I have no choice but to let you go..." she let out a low growl deep in her throat. "I sugest you take the med kit over there and run..." with that said she turned twards the door and it swong open, she looked back at Lavan before troting up the stairs and out the door. "consider yourself lucky young one..." she said before leaving the house, disappearing into the long grass.
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« Reply #146 on Aug 27, 2004, 4:32pm » | |
Lavan shut his eyes, scowling slightly.
"Lucky..." He mumbled as he changd into his human form, putting his hood back over his face a he followed Ichi's path.
As he got out he looked around for her then he sat down, looking at the floor.
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« Reply #147 on Aug 31, 2004, 6:07pm » | |
Ryp let out a moan of anguish as he heard the sickening crunch of bone and tendon.
He lay still, blood running down his injured wrist, not daring to move.
He breathed a deep sigh of relief when the weres finally left. Standing up and dragging his injured form over towards the door, he picked up the med pack. He was glad Ichi had left it, if a wound like his got infected, it would not be pretty.
He wrapped his injured limb in a tight bandage, wincing in pain and keeping a close watch on the door in case the weres decided to come back.
When he was finished, he re-fastened his cloak around his neck, pulled the hood over his head and left.
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